I really, really like the way you write, and in particular the way you portray the image of Yukimura (such hotness!) and the mental workings of his loyal Saizo. But alas, I fear I'm missing the point of the "Sasuke" exchange - I don't understand what is unsaid between Saizo and Kosuke, and I fear that may be because I've never read the manga, just seen the anime. Can you explain, or would that ruin the effect?
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carisma_sensei
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Date: 2008-08-05 03:51 am (UTC)(Seriously, it's deliciously written.)