Wow. There was so much there that I don't know where to start. I'm accepting the primitive, wild Hakkai more easily than I thought I would be able too. I'm still seeing him even when he is acting so out of what we have come to see as his character. The non-con scene was extremely intense and the end of this chapter was visual and lovely. Tired now but will definitely be reading more tomorrow. Epic good fic-ness. Really good job and I can't wait to read the rest!!
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carisma_sensei
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Date: 2008-11-16 09:40 am (UTC)