Yes, the Lindsay brothers were OCs. Once I realized that I needed to go back and put more in the middle, they got a little more personality.
I can't say I'm surprised that you like the un-dream - it really is the core of the story and almost the first bit that was written, although smilla helped me fine-tune it. I'm not as happy with the rest, but I needed it to move them out of harm's way, as it were.
I'm sorry that Calum is rather talky - it's what he seemed to want to do! I guess Ibun will help crystallize his personality a little more in canon, and I can learn how far off I was.
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Aww, I'm so glad you liked it!
Yes, the Lindsay brothers were OCs. Once I realized that I needed to go back and put more in the middle, they got a little more personality.
I can't say I'm surprised that you like the un-dream - it really is the core of the story and almost the first bit that was written, although smilla helped me fine-tune it. I'm not as happy with the rest, but I needed it to move them out of harm's way, as it were.
I'm sorry that Calum is rather talky - it's what he seemed to want to do! I guess Ibun will help crystallize his personality a little more in canon, and I can learn how far off I was.