This is... This is... So unbelievably sweet and beautiful and yet heart-breaking.
I think Jien is often forgotten or even dealt the bad hand for leaving Gojyo... People forget how much he had to go trough as well. I love how you wrote this from his perspective, and it's beautiful. Can't really come up with anything more coherent, but the details and the emotional baggage is amazing.
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carisma_sensei
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Date: 2007-11-18 01:57 pm (UTC)I think Jien is often forgotten or even dealt the bad hand for leaving Gojyo... People forget how much he had to go trough as well. I love how you wrote this from his perspective, and it's beautiful. Can't really come up with anything more coherent, but the details and the emotional baggage is amazing.