Nicely done and well written. Sick of me whining for het, my housemate Jedishampoo pointed me in the direction of your story.
Your writing is flawless and I love your depictions of Hakkai and Yaone.
One small whine: You faded to black on teh sex!!! M'girl, how can het writers hope to compete with the slashstresses if we're pulling our punches?? Bring it! says I. ( ;
Don't take my ranting too seriously. Your story was much appreciated.
(I read a bit of the 'reply' thread... did the girl!gojoxhakkai ever get written?)
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Nicely done and well written. Sick of me whining for het, my housemate Jedishampoo pointed me in the direction of your story.
Your writing is flawless and I love your depictions of Hakkai and Yaone.
One small whine: You faded to black on teh sex!!! M'girl, how can het writers hope to compete with the slashstresses if we're pulling our punches?? Bring it! says I. ( ;
Don't take my ranting too seriously. Your story was much appreciated.
(I read a bit of the 'reply' thread... did the girl!gojoxhakkai ever get written?)