Mmmmm, so much love for this. There's just never enough fic focusing on the concrete sensory aspects of limiters and youkai transformation, so I adore the way you get across his perceptions changing and expanding...and of course the bit where even in the midst of that mental and physical turmoil, he's categorizing Gojyo as smelling like home just squeezes at my heart, as do both of the scenes where he sees the abused, hopeless child under grown Gojyo's expressions. Warm and painful all at once, indeed!
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Date: 2008-03-25 08:28 am (UTC)